when i saw u on the first day ...
i dont know who u are....
second day...
U were a stranger...
The third dayU look into my eyes..
and whisphered "friend"...
The fourth day...
I found ur voice...
inside a sea shell...
Fifth day...
I listen to the voice
heard the sound of occean
i throw the sea shell
sixth day...The day of trail...
u stood there...clam,quite
Yes u were smiling..
seventhday...
day of execution..
I hanged u...
In my heart..
Now there is no "u" and" me"
Bcoz i buried u inside me..
Now i am u..
And we are companions...
6 comments:
Its really grttt chechii... i liked it very much... A short poem full of expressions... Full of Feelings.. Full of Thirst for Luv... Full of Wandering in the narrow path of Life just to discover somethng which is beyond words, time and everythng..... Full of thoughts that make one to thnk abt wat he had and wat he had not.... Full of impressions which one will thnk of those moments which he or she had lost in the pathway of life just because of the busy schedule of Material world...... Keep on writing... u will do that... just coz poems are never ending... so is the case of feeling and expressions also.....
very good introduction.nice poem..thanks and regrads pradeep
Yes ,now i am you..!
"aham brahma(itz)smi!"
"thal thwam assi"
Yes, i read ur poem ...
i dont know who u r...
2day u r a stranger to me...
but i like to wisper in your ears...
will u b my friend...
g8 work, keep going. All the best
I like this words and picture very much.. great
great use of words..and depth of feeling
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