Sunday, 11 February 2007

companion


when i saw u on the first day ...

i dont know who u are....

second day...

U were a stranger...

The third dayU look into my eyes..

and whisphered "friend"...

The fourth day...

I found ur voice...

inside a sea shell...

Fifth day...

I listen to the voice

heard the sound of occean

i throw the sea shell

sixth day...The day of trail...

u stood there...clam,quite

Yes u were smiling..

seventhday...

day of execution..

I hanged u...

In my heart..

Now there is no "u" and" me"

Bcoz i buried u inside me..

Now i am u..

And we are companions...

6 comments:

Mazhathullikal said...

Its really grttt chechii... i liked it very much... A short poem full of expressions... Full of Feelings.. Full of Thirst for Luv... Full of Wandering in the narrow path of Life just to discover somethng which is beyond words, time and everythng..... Full of thoughts that make one to thnk abt wat he had and wat he had not.... Full of impressions which one will thnk of those moments which he or she had lost in the pathway of life just because of the busy schedule of Material world...... Keep on writing... u will do that... just coz poems are never ending... so is the case of feeling and expressions also.....

കാണാമറയതത് said...

very good introduction.nice poem..thanks and regrads pradeep

mullassery said...

Yes ,now i am you..!
"aham brahma(itz)smi!"
"thal thwam assi"

sreeharics said...

Yes, i read ur poem ...

i dont know who u r...

2day u r a stranger to me...

but i like to wisper in your ears...

will u b my friend...

g8 work, keep going. All the best

This is Sijo Kodiyan said...

I like this words and picture very much.. great

kmanoj said...

great use of words..and depth of feeling

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